"To non-musicians, terms such as diatonic, cadence, or even key and pitch can throw up an unnecessary barrier. Musicians and critics sometimes appear to live behind a veil of technical terms that can sound pretentious. How many times have you read a concert review in the newspaper and found you have no idea what the reviewer is saying? "Her sustained appoggiatura was flawed by an inability to complete the roulade." Or, "I can't believe they modulated to C-sharp minor! How ridiculous!" What we really want to know is whether the music was performed in a way that moved the audience. Whether the singer seemed to inhabit the character she was singing about. You might want the reviewer to compare tonight's performance to that of a previous night or a different ensemble. We're usually interested in the music, not the technical devices that were used. We wouldn't stand for it if a restaurant reviewer started to speculate about the precise temperature at which the chef introduced the lemon juice in a hollandaise sauce, or if a film critic talked about aperture of the lens that the cinematographer used; we shouldn't stand for it in music, either."
This frustrated me on several levels. Allow me to list them.
1) Every field has jargon, from law to medicine to architecture to photography. To act as though the use of musical jargon is a deliberate attempt to exclude others is ridiculous. What is wrong, in one who understands the mechanics of music, from wanting to understand, appreciate, and explain their musical experiences in technical terms? Music criticism in the newspaper cannot simply tell you day after day that the singer was believable as Salome, and that the audience was moved. Readers are looking for more than individualistic emotional descriptions. It is absolutely wonderful if the performance brought tears to your eyes (indeed, that sort of reaction is why we do it!), but such personal experiences with music do not translate well to objective journalism and criticism.
2) I have never once read a sentence in a review complaining that "Her sustained appoggiatura was flawed by an inability to complete the roulade." I can only see this sort of sentence showing up in a specialized publication-one for early music performance practice, perhaps-and in that case, jargon should be used since it is intended for an audience who understands it.
When directed to a broad audience, jargon has to be used properly, of course. Anybody who's spent any time with Milton Babbitt knows that there are musicians and composers out there who believe that "If it's art, it isn't for all; If it's for all, it isn't art." This line of thought is deliberately intended to confuse the layman and speak only to those who have spent a great deal of time studying the technical aspects of music, and as such their works and writings are often relegated to the University library. If used properly, jargon should seek to add depth without confusion; a nod to those who understand it. Besides, most people reading classical reviews in the newspaper are those that, even if they are non-musicians, are the type to spend a lot of time with the music and will likely learn the jargon simply be being immersed in it.
3) "We're usually interested in the music, not the technical devices that were used." This sort of talk is belittling to those who spend their life studying it. As if we should be made to apologize for developing complex jargon to describe musical processes. Music is a complex subject! Attempting to understand it gave rise to theory, and can employ acoustical physics, historical contextualization, and neurological studies!
I think this statement also belittles the average audience member. The same statement could be made of anything:
"We're usually interested in the building, not the architectural devices that were used to construct it."
"We're usually interested in the gourmet food, not the ingredients that were used to create those complex flavors."
"We're usually interested in the Mona Lisa, not the techniques and brush strokes that were used to paint her."
Yes, we tend to be primarily concerned with the surface appeal. "That's a beautiful building. This dinner is fantastic." But, as a curious person, I soon want to know more about how it was constructed. I've tracked down articles about when to introduce the lemon juice to the hollandaise sauce (particularly of interest since hollandaise is liable to break unless executed properly). I watch Alton Brown because he gives me reasons. Instead of just spouting the recipe, he tells me the chemical reactions that make the recipe work, or fail. The example of the cinematographer's aperture setting might be of interest, if it's used to highlight why the film had such a distinctive look.
I suppose this is the main reason I was upset by this excerpt. It assumes so little of the audience, and begins by accusing the music makers of deliberate pretentiousness, as if we get some esoteric kick out of confusing non-musicians. If you're looking for a simple emotional reaction to a concert, go to the concert yourself and write about it in your Facebook status. Don't expect critics to dumb down their jargon. Jargon is used to give depth and dimension, and I, for one, would be appalled to see the result of taking it all out of our journalism.